雅思写作Task1小作文流程图范文--巧克力的生产过程

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Task：The process of chocolate production.

雅思写作小作文流程图范文汇总

思路解析：

1. 介绍过程要使用一般现在时

2. 使用定语从句将有关联的两句话连接。

3. 大量使用被动语态。

4. 使用一些表示顺序的连接词。

5. 一般不需要写总结。

7分范文：

The diagram explains the process for the making of chocolate. There are a

total of ten stages in the process, beginning with the growing of the pods on

the cacao trees and culminating in the production of the chocolate.

To begin, the cocoa comes from the cacao tree, which is grown in the South

American and African continents and the country of Indonesia. Once the pods are

ripe and red, they are harvested and the white cocoa beans are removed.

Following a period of fermentation, they are then laid out on a large tray so

they can dry under the sun. Next, they are placed into large sacks and delivered

to the factory. They are then roasted at a temperature of 350 degrees, after

which the beans are crushed and separated from their outer shell. In the final

stage, this inner part that is left is pressed and the chocolate is

produced.

(152 words)

8分范文：

The diagram shows the stages in the process of making chocolate.

Chocolate comes from the cacao tree, which is grown in parts of South

America, Africa and Indonesia. The tree produces large red pods which contain

white cocoa beans. Firstly, when the pods are ripe, they are harvested, the

beans are removed and they are fermented for several days in large wooden boxes.

During the fermenting process, the beans turn brown.

Next, the brown beans are spread in the sun to dry. They are then put in

large sacks and transported by train or lorry. After this, the beans are taken

to a chocolate factory where they are roasted in an oven at temperatures of

between 250 and 350 degree Celsius.

After being roasted, the beans are crushed and the outer shell is removed.

This part is not needed for making chocolate. Finally, the inner part of the

bean is pressed and liquid chocolate is produced.

(156 words)