2017年11月4日雅思A类小作文范文：柱状图

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2017年11月4日 雅思写作小作文范文解析

小作文

类型

柱状图

题目

The chart below shows the population percentage

aged 65 and above in three countries in 1980, 2000, and predicted percentage

in 2030.

范文解析

本题是典型的柱状图，其中涉及到三个年份和三种类型的数据，总体来说数据分析起来并不复杂，注意在描述已经发生的数据和未来预测的数据时时态的变化。对比应从三个国家的历年变化趋势展开。

高分表达（范文中已用红色标注）

share an upward trend

共同拥有上升的趋势

the figure for… saw no change

…的数据并没有发生改变

reach the peak at

在…到达顶峰

enjoy a gentle rise of

有一个小小的上升

level off

趋平

be estimated to face growing

预计会有上升

雅思A类写作小作文范文

The bar chart illustrates how the populations of senior citizens who

are aged 65 or more in Canada, Germany and UK had changed since 1980 and how

they would change before 2030.

Different from UK whose aging population remained the same, Canada and

Germany shared an upward trend within the

first two decades. In the year 1980, the proportion of the over-65-year-olds

was at exactly 10% in Canada and around 15% in Germany, doubling to around

20% and increasing by 10% or so separately by 2000 while the figure for UK saw no change, at approximately

15%.

A marginal increase of 5% is expected to continue in Canada and

Germany, both of which will reach the peak at some

25% and 30% respectively in 2030, with the growth of Canada slowing over this

period. Likewise, with the highest point at nearly 20% in 2030, it is

estimated that the percentage of English senior citizens will enjoy a gentle rise of only 5% in 30 years, despite leveling off between 1980 and 2000.

Overall, there are more old people（aged over 65） in Germany than in Canada and UK throughout the

1980-2030 period but all of them is estimated to face

growing aging population in the future.

范文原创自易伯华邢睿赢老师

字数

208 words

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