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Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will

remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

阅读范文前的思考题：

1.观点类文章是否可以折衷?

2.这个文章的重心到底是newspapers还是Internet?

3.关键词important source of news ，newspapers, on the Internet如何替换?

满分范文

The Internet is beginning to rival newspapers as the best place to find

information about what is happening in the world. I believe that this trend will

continue, and the Internet will soon be just as important as the traditional

press.

On the one hand, I believe that newspapers will continue to be a vital source

of information, even in the Internet age. Firstly, newspapers are the most

traditional means of communicating the news, and not everyone wants to or is

able to use the Internet instead. For example, old people or those in rural

areas might not have the ability or opportunity to get online, while many of us

simply prefer newspapers even if we do have Internet access. Secondly,

newspapers can be trusted as reliable sources of news because they employ

professional journalists and editors. Finally, many people like the experience

of holding and reading a paper rather than looking at a computer screen.

However, the Internet is likely to become just as popular as newspapers for a

variety of reasons. The main reason is that it allows us much faster access to

news in real time and wherever we are, on different gadgets and mobile devices.

Another key benefit of online news compared to newspapers is the ability to

share articles, discuss them with other people, give our views, and even

contribute with our own updates on social media. For example, there has been an

explosion in the use of platforms like Twitter and YouTube where anyone can

share their news and views. A final point is that this source of news is less

damaging to the environment.

In conclusion, I disagree with the view that newspapers will continue to be

the main source of news, because I believe that the Internet will soon be

equally important.

思考题的回答：

1.观点类文章是否可以折衷?支持的观点写前面，还是后面?

回答：这个文章的主要立场是网络以后会和报纸同等重要，虽然报纸也重要。

属于折衷写法。

作者主要是支持网络以后也会很重要，而报纸不是最重要的。

支持的观点写到了后面，主体部分第二段。

2.这个文章的重心到底是newspapers还是Internet?

回答：newspapers和Internet各写一段好处。两者都是论述的重心。

范文而且不断地将两者进行对比，从而更好地扣题。

3.关键词important source of news ，newspapers, on the Internet如何替换?

看到下面的词伙，你就知道同义词替换是最笨的办法

Important source of news的替换表达

the best place to find information 找到信息最好的地方

a vital source of information 信息的主要来源

newspapers的替换表达

the traditional press传统的新闻媒体

traditional means of communicating the news最传统的信息交流方式

reliable sources of news可靠的新闻来源

read a paper 阅读报纸

On the Internet的相关表达

in the Internet age 网络时代

use the Internet 使用网络

get online 上网

have Internet access 可以上网

looking at a computer screen 看电脑屏幕

faster access to news in real time 更快获得实时信息

online news 在线新闻

on social media 在社交媒体上