2017年12月16日雅思写作Task2满分范文

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17年12月16日雅思写作Task2题目为：Some people think that social networking sites have a

huge negative impact on both individual and society. To what extent do you agree

or disagree?本场写作为媒体类话题，有关社交媒体对个人及社会的消极方面，你如何看?为大家带来满分(band 9)参考范文。详情如下：

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雅思写作满分范文：

Social networking sites, for instance Facebook, are thought by some to have

had a detrimental effect on individual people as well as society and local

communities. However, in my opinion, while I believe that such sites are mainly

beneficial to the individual, I agree that they have had a damaging effect on

local communities.

With regards to individuals, the impact that online social media has had on

each individual person has clear advantages. Firstly, people from different

countries are brought together through such sites as Facebook whereas before the

development of technology and social networking sites, people rarely had the

chance to meet or communicate with anyone outside of their immediate circle or

community. Secondly, Facebook also has social groups which offer individuals a

chance to meet and participate in discussions with people who share common

interests.

On the other hand, the effect that Facebook and other social networking sites

have had on societies and local communities can only be seen as negative. Rather

than individual people taking part in their local community, they are instead

choosing to take more interest in people online. Consequently, the people within

local communities are no longer forming close or supportive relationships.

Furthermore, society as a whole is becoming increasingly disjointed and

fragmented as people spend more time online with people they have never met face

to face and who they are unlikely to ever meet in the future.

To conclude, although social networking sites have brought individuals closer

together, they have not had the same effect on society or local communities.

Local communities should do more to try and involve local people in local

activities in order to promote the future of community life.

雅思写作点评:

This essay shows you the organisation of ideas into paragraphs and

also how a clear answer is given in the thesis statement in the introduction and

then supported and explained in full throughout the essay. You will also see

paraphrasing for advantage / disadvantage language which can be useful for you

in other essays. Furthermore, the word length of this essay is typical for

anyone aiming for band score 6, 7 or above. (280 Words)

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