【易伯华出品】2016年12月10日雅思真题G类大作文范文

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Task：It is sometimes side that young people are free to choose their future

career. However, some people may also say it should be their parents or teachers

to make the choice for them.

Discuss both views and show your own opinion.

Sample answer：

Dear Sir or Madam,

When choosing a job, in order to live up to parents’ or tutors’ expectation,

a number of young people would follow parents’ or tutors’ advice rather than

take up a job they really have a passion for. In my point of view, it is not a

wise choice and it should be the young people’s own decision.

Many people may argue that compared with the green graduates, their parents

and teachers have more social experience and better personal resources to draw

on, both of which are essential considerations when choosing a career. Provided

that young people who just enter the workforce take advice from their parents or

mentor and opt for a job chosen by them, they are more likely to have an

advantage over other job hunters in terms of experience and resources.

Consequently, they have more chances to get promoted and enjoy decent

salary.

This is true in some extent and may be effective in the short term. However

in the long run, instead of experience and resources, all of which can be

accumulated over time, what is more closely related to career success is ability

and interest and both of them are more dependent on young people themselves. So

if young people desire to gain achievement on their career path, they probably

have to reconsider the choices offered by other people and figure out which kind

of job match their skills and interests.

All in all, I strong believe that to achieve career goals, the youth have to

base their career choices on their own traits and only in this way, can they

truly feel a sense of pride and belonging from their work.

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