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Task：Some working parents believe childcare centers can provide best care for

their children, while others think of other family members like grandparents can

do this job. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Sample answer：

Traditionally, toddlers are raised by their relatives such as grandparents in

most countries. However, daycare centers have gained a growing popularity among

working parents in recent years. From my point of view, attending a childcare center has more benefits.

One obvious argument in favor of daycare centers is that it provides children

with the professional childhood education. This is because a good daycare centre

is normally equipped with well-trained staff who can impart different skills,

such as singing, dancing, painting and storytelling, to children through a

variety of activities during the day. In addition to the well-organised,

structured projects, toddlers are provided with more opportunities to socialize

with other peers, which helps them gain confidence and self-consicousness.

However, these opportunities are rare to achieve if they are watched over by

grandparents.

Opponents feel that a relative care is as effective as children center. The

reason for this is that taking care of a child is never an easy task, as

children need constant love and attention. In fact, due to the limited number of

caregivers, children are less likely to get the one-on-one care. By contrast,

relatives, grandparents in particular, have sufficient time to take care of

their beloved grandchildren, which also contributes to the family bond.

I personally believe that no child can become an active and valuable member

of any society without intercommunicating with other peers. Therefore, although

there are conniving arguments for a relative care, it is better to send them

into daycare centers in the childhood period.

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