8月14日雅思大作文示范写作 | 发展中国家为什么着力发展旅游业?
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2021年8月14雅思大作文题目
An increasing number of developing countries are expanding their tourist
industry.
Why do you think it is the case? Do you think it is a positive or negative
development?
写作示范
Introduction
Of late, more and more developing countries are joining the wave of tourism
development. I tend to think that they do so based on their fragile state of the
economy, and to both the local population and the government, it is a favorable
decision.
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分析原因
The primary reason why developing countries expand their tourist industry
is the small investment it requires. By exploiting the potential 开发潜能of tourism,
which mainly refers to natural scenery and historical remains, these countries
can rapidly integrate into 加入 the international economy. In comparison,
following the traditional path of industrialization, to them, would be too
demanding 要求过高 in both capital 资本 and solid technological strength科技力量. Besides,
tourism is hugely rewarding 回报巨大. Without much investment, it can be a starting
point for local economic take-off 经济起飞, as a constant flow of tourists can
contribute to the destination countries with payment on recreation equipment and
other daily expenses here.
解析
Ø
分析发展中国家的这种作为时,一定要扣紧“发展中国家”这个关键词,我们所理解的这类国家是不是经济不够发达?科技较为落后?那么对它们来说,发展旅游业(投资小回报大)是加快发展的首 选项目无疑了。
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分析利弊
Indeed, the flow of tourists may multiply 使成倍增长the requirements of
improving infrastructure, augmenting the burden on 加重负担under developing
countries. However, I believe that expanding tourism is more likely to be
positive. Apart from the revenue, the positive impact can be strongly felt in
terms of employment for locals. Scenic spots, transport, hotels, and restaurants
all generate jobs where they are needed the most, which can improve the quality
of life for people in this area. From a larger scale, with international
connections promoted, these developing countries can leverage 利用 them to bridge
more business collaborations with others in the long run, thus accelerating
their development to catch up with other advanced countries.
解析
Ø 分析发展中国家发展旅游业的利弊时,首先是人流量大时,可能对当地政府(经济实力不足)有一定的要求。
但毕竟利大于弊,经济发展的同时能提供就业并促成长远的国际合作。
Conclusion
In conclusion, expanding the tourist industry to developing countries is a
wise decision because of the low investment and the handsome profits. Not only
that, but tourism can benefit individuals in employment and the government in
international cooperation.平【------
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