2018年6月23日雅思大作文真题解析：追逐奢侈品

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人们竞相追逐购买奢侈品，背后的原因竟是……购买奢侈品是积极还是消极的趋势呢？是的，这是2018年6月23日场的雅思写作大作文真题，追逐奢侈品在当今社会已经是一种时尚，潮流的象征，这背后的推手是谁？谁在消费奢侈品？奢侈品的火爆带来的影响究竟是积极的还是消极的呢？一起来看看本期雅思真题解析及大作文范文吧：

雅思大作文范文解析：

本题讨论人们买奢饰品的原因以及这是一个消极还是积极趋势。题目类型是混合类题目， 题目问问法是What are the reasons?Do

you think it is a positive or negative development?类型，可以采用4段式作文结构。

文章结构 P1：引入话题+回答原因和表明观点(否定观点)

P2：指出此消费模式的原因：融入社会圈;

P3：论证观点：对个体的心理健康和社会都有负面影响;

P4：总结：概括文章内容和重申观点。

高分话题表达

Brand conscious 有名牌意识的

Motive 动机

Consumerism 消费主义

Might as well 最好

Disposable income 可支配收入

This is the case in sth. 这是一个事例在某方面

Take a heavy toll on 对...有负面影响

Be perceived as 认为

Be of no use 无用的

Keep up with the Joneses 攀比

雅思写作高分结构

With the disposable income rising 独立主格结构

Not because...but because 平行结构

..., thus doing sth 非谓语结构做结果状语

Available and accessible 押头韵

......, an unhealthy mentality that 概括性同位语

Never will this be 部分倒装结构表达强调

雅思大作文真题范文

Luxury brands such as BMW, CHANEL, and Rolex are increasingly available

and accessible in today’s world so that an ever increasing number of people are

brand conscious and purchase seemingly high quality, pricy luxuries. The major

motive for such consumerism is the desire for better social acceptance and it

might as well be discouraged.

One main reason is that consuming luxury products could help people to fit

in,whether at school, work or in social circles. With the disposable income

rising, buying these well-known brands from the perspective of consumers will

contribute to greater social acceptance. This is especially the case in fashion.

Some consumers often buy clothing brands either perceived as fashionable, trendy

or high class, or easily accepted by a particular subculture or peer group.

Never will this unhealthy desire for famous brands be better for people

themselves and the society as a whole. Some products in famous brands indeed

have better quality and reputation. For example, Audi or BMW produce cars with

elegant appearance and amusing spare parts, thus being more appealing to

customers than those unknown brand cars. However, this is not that simple. There

are still a number of individuals who buy these products not because they are

extraodinary in quality but because they can help them be accepted by a certain

group or show distinct personal image and even give them a chance to show off ,

even though these products may be of no use to consumers. In this case, people

will just keep up with the Joneses, an unhealthy mentality that will not only

take a heavy toll on their financial condition and personal life but result in

some social problems,such as the waste of resources and other negative social

consequences.

In conclusion, purchasing famous brand products like clothes, cars and other

items maybe simply for being socially acceptable and my view is that this kind

of consumption is detrimental to every single individual involved and the whole

society.

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