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Task：

Many students are taught to push themselves and try hard to be better than

their classmates, rather than work together for everyone’s benefits. Do the

disadvantages of training students to be competitive outweigh the

advantages?

很多学生被教育要努力学习，要超过其他同学，而不是一起学习，共同受益。这种训练学生变得有好胜心的方式是否缺点大于优点?

Sample answer：

It is common that we are living in a world filled with sever competition in

both businesses and individuals, even in those who study at schools. Personally,

I think the merits do not necessarily outweigh the demerits.

There are two benefits of developing students’ habit of competing with each

other. Firstly, establishing a competitive environment is able to enormously

motivate students of all levels to keep learning and working hard in order to

keep up with peers and achieve more goals. In other words, this prevents

ordinary students from giving up on themselves and makes them realize that being

competitive is a quality that is capable of building up their perseverance.

Furthermore, it is undeniable that competitive awareness can cultivate students

to improve their problem-solving skills through coping with continuous

challenges alone. Specifically, they are more likely to make great attempts to

figure out problems in more effective ways rather than wait for others to find

solutions.

When it comes to drawbacks, we cannot ignore the fact that cooperation plays

an extremely imperative role in students’ whole life. Those who do not know how

to cooperate may find it difficult to adapt to working environment in the

future, for one-man team is less appreciated in a large number of firms. Another

perceived disadvantage is that enormous competition has the possibility for

students to accumulate more pressure, especially for those who are not good at

dealing with stress, contributing to insomnia or other health issues. Therefore,

it can negatively affect their learning attitudes.

In conclusion, although encouraging students to be competitive is beneficial

for their academic studies and surrounding adaptability, it could become

demerits when teachers only emphasize on teaching competition and ignore the

impact of cooperation.

(288 words)

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