【易伯华出品】2016年9月24日雅思考试大作文范文

2024-04-26

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【易伯华出品】2016年9月24日雅思考试大作文范文

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Task:In many cities an increasing number of people don’t know their neighbors

and they seems no longer develop any sense of community.

【易伯华出品】2016年9月24日雅思考试大作文范文

1 analysis the main reasons

2 what measures can be taken to improve this?

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Undeniably, indifference and ignorance find their way into neighborhoods. In

the essay, the underlying reasons and the practical moves will be expounded.

The primary factor leading to the significant alienation among neighbors is

the prosperity of economy. In the past, individuals heavily relied on the

community to rear livestock or grow rice and vegetables while in the present,

people depend on themselves to work in the office and have meals in the

restaurant. More importantly, to ensure an advantageous position in the face of

stiff competition, employees have to spend the majority of their time working in

office or at home, so they cannot afford to spare time gossiping about weather,

dogs and new babies with other occupants.

Another contributing element is the intrusion of a variety of entertainments

brought by advancing technology. Previously, the single recreation form of

television forces residents to watch one film together. Currently, portable

devices such as I-Phone, I-Pad, Kindle enable inhabitants to live in the virtual

communities created by social networking websites, so they distain to socialize

with other dwellers in real life.

To reverse the tendency, the government and the community committee should

stand out and shoulder their responsibilities correspondingly. For one thing,

the government can invite advertising agencies to design public service

advertisements to raise people's awareness of community. For another, the

community committee should launch mini-games or sports activities regularly or

on festivals or holidays, so as to engage more denizens in the neighborhood.

In a nutshell, a supportive community is gradually turned into a lonely

island by a self-reliant and competitive economic pattern and diversified

technological innovations, the status quo that can only be altered by the

endeavors of both the authority and the community leaders.

(286 words)

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