18年4月7日雅思写作大作文范文：变富有就该帮助穷人（易伯华原创）

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2018年4月7日场的雅思写作考试上热搜了，是的，这一次基本不给考鸭活路，不仅报名费涨价，写作题目也变难了。易伯华雅思君弱弱问一句，本场雅思大作文题目看懂了吗?写跑题了吗?题目为社会类话题：Some

people think the most important thing about being rich is that give person an

opportunity to help other

people.简单来说就是先富带动后富。作为富人最重要的就是去帮助别人。你在哪些方面是同意或者是不同意呢?一起来看看易伯华出品的雅思大作文参考范文吧。

雅思大作文题目

Some people think the most important thing about being rich is that give

person an opportunity to help other people. To what extent do you agree or

disagree?

雅思大作文解析：

本题为社会生活类话题。题目问题是同意还是不同意变得富有最重要的事是帮助他人。考生在审题时，要注意“the most

important”这个形容词最高级的限定作用。思考论点时建议多往disagree的方面展开。

paragraph 1 :结合时代背景引入话题且表明自己的观点。

paragraph 2: 论述富人帮助他人的必要性。(通过对比富人的富有和穷人的困境展开)

paragraph 3: 论述富人帮助他人非最重要的。(从自由支配财产和政府两个层面展开)

paragraph 4: 总结上文论点，强调自己的观点。

雅思大作文参考范文

In an age when economic success is easily achievable, a number of businessmen

and elites have accumulated their property to a larger sum. Some people claim

that the most significant thing for the wealthy is to offer assistance to those

in need. Personally speaking, I disagree with this assertion.

Admittedly, it is the moral obligation for the rich groups to provide

financial support to people who live in poor and disadvantageous situations. As

is reported, over a billion people are still living in object poverty and each

year over six million children die as a result of malnutrition. However, the

cost of a dinner in a luxury restaurant for the millionaires may be equal to

several years’ living expense for the poor. Therefore, it seems reasonable and

sensible for them to donate money and goods to charity.

Nevertheless, I do not contend such practice is the vital thing for being

rich. The most rooted reason is that, they are entitled to allocate their

wealth. A case in the point is that large amount of disposal income can be

invested in the acquisition of some promising venture companies, in which case,

they are likely to earn a fortune in the near future. In addition, it is

government that should place a high priority on fighting hunger and poverty.

Financial aid, sound welfare system and sufficient employment opportunities are

all supposed to be provided to counteract with this recurring problem. If the

authority only relies on the efforts of the rich, this potential threat to

social stability will not be fundamentally removed.

In conclusion, although helping people is an indispensable duty for the

wealthy, it is not the most important. Instead, the state should formulate

policies and feasible strategies to build up a wealth and prosperous

society.(295 words)

范文原创自易伯华老师Emily.Fan

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