雅思写作真题范文犯罪类话题--罪犯的教育意义
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Task:Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some
people think that they are the best people to talk to school students about the
danger of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Sample answer:
A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic
skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to become
law-abiding citizens. While some people claim that those ex-prisoners are the
best teachers to raise the awareness regarding laws, I believe that other
measures are equally effective.
Obviously, ex-prisoners play a vital role in cutting youth crime. This is
because those released prisoners have witnessed the horrors happened in the jail
and they may also experience some of them. At the same time, they can share the
tears and sorrows they suffered in the jails and the harm they have brought to
the victims and their family members. This is more impressive than the
traditional lectures given by professors. By listening to a wide range of real
cases in person, young generation will realize the consequence of the
irresponsible behavior deeply and discipline themselves strictly in the
future.
Nevertheless, I believe other alternatives should be taken into consideration
as well. It is common for people to have a fear towards criminals, especially
those who have committed violent crimes and therefore face-to-face conversation
between the young and people with a criminal record might be inappropriate in
some cases. By contrast, policemen normally have a good impression among
youngsters and they can become the active voice in reducing juvenile
delinquency. Apart from them, parents can certainly be the first to help
children learn the differences between right and wrong since they are the people
who know their children best in the world.
In my opinion, it is the responsibility of every member of a society to help
the young generation to become good citizens.
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