雅思写作真题范文犯罪类话题--罪犯的教育意义

2024-04-26

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雅思写作真题范文犯罪类话题--罪犯的教育意义

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Task:Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some

people think that they are the best people to talk to school students about the

danger of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

雅思写作真题范文犯罪类话题--罪犯的教育意义

Sample answer:

A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic

skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to become

law-abiding citizens. While some people claim that those ex-prisoners are the

best teachers to raise the awareness regarding laws, I believe that other

measures are equally effective.

Obviously, ex-prisoners play a vital role in cutting youth crime. This is

because those released prisoners have witnessed the horrors happened in the jail

and they may also experience some of them. At the same time, they can share the

tears and sorrows they suffered in the jails and the harm they have brought to

the victims and their family members. This is more impressive than the

traditional lectures given by professors. By listening to a wide range of real

cases in person, young generation will realize the consequence of the

irresponsible behavior deeply and discipline themselves strictly in the

雅思写作真题范文犯罪类话题--罪犯的教育意义

future.

Nevertheless, I believe other alternatives should be taken into consideration

as well. It is common for people to have a fear towards criminals, especially

those who have committed violent crimes and therefore face-to-face conversation

between the young and people with a criminal record might be inappropriate in

some cases. By contrast, policemen normally have a good impression among

youngsters and they can become the active voice in reducing juvenile

delinquency. Apart from them, parents can certainly be the first to help

children learn the differences between right and wrong since they are the people

who know their children best in the world.

In my opinion, it is the responsibility of every member of a society to help

the young generation to become good citizens.

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