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【首段： 分别简述各图表内容】

The table illustrates three specific sources from which the police budget was collected in a particular region in Britain in 2017 and 2018. The two pies depict the corresponding distribution of the budget.

【主体段1-table-数据对比- 1. 2017 VS 2018-数值增减情况比较(均增加);2. 单个年份中的最值(突出最大值)】

In terms of the police budget, with a marginal growth found in 2018, ‘National Government’ made the greatest contribution in both 2017 and 2018, with 175.5 million pounds and 177.8 million pounds respectively. Next came the ‘Local Taxes’, whose figure rose dramatically to 102.3 million pounds, approximately 11 million pounds more than that in 2017.

语言点使用：

1.程度修饰词(adj. / adv.)

2.独立主格结构

3.倒装句

4.定语从句

【主体段2-pies-数据对比- 1. 2017 VS 2018-比例增减情况比较; 2. 单个年份中的最(大/小)值 】

With regard to how the money was distributed, the years of 2017 and 2018 both witnessed that salaries offered to officers and staff constituted the largest portion, with the proportion dropping from 75% to 69%. In contrast, the investment in the technology saw an opposite trend. Although there was a rise of 6% in 2018, the figure remained the smallest. In addition, the spending on buildings and transport stabilized at 17% in both two years.

语言点使用：

1.动词使用

2.宾语从句

3.独立主格结构

【结尾：总结各图表的特征】

Overall, a growing trend was found in all sources of the police budget, while the largest amount of spending went to the salaries offered.