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在中国学生眼里，利物浦大学坐落在英国安逸的港口小镇，学校因足球而闻名，还有专门的足球研究中心。利物浦大学是难得的古老又充满活力的大学，吸引很多国际学生。本文分享是分别拿到该校2017年法律与犯罪学、数学、法律与政治专业offer的文书，有相关专业的小伙伴记得收藏哦。

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Mathematical Sciences Personal Statement

数学科学个人PS

mathematics, overlooked as it is, is the most fundamental subject in our

educational system and is THE enabling tool to solving problems. My commitment

to maths stems from my recognition that as an effective problem solver, one

ought to understand what is expected to resolve day-to-day difficulties.

Mathematical proofs combine both logic and creativity and it is the beauty of

maths as well as practicality which makes me want to study it further.

We are encompassed by mathematics; it surrounds us. My pursuit in maths

broadened when I stumbled across a YouTube video from ‘Numberphile’, I began to

see the subject in a different light; it was more than just an academic subject

studied for a specified number of hours per week. Instead I grasped that it was

a way of explaining the inexplicable. Throughout my maths AS Level, I realised

that I was acquiring an alarming passion for proofs. Combining this growing

interest with reading books in the subject I appreciated that I had previously

not understood how important meticulous working was until I learnt that it is

essential to trace errors and eradicate assumptions and that simply having the

right answer is insufficient. From Chemistry I have similarly learnt how to use

meticulous working and designing experiments to solve problems, analyse and

understand data. Through these pragmatic skills I have been able to bridge the

gap between A-level and university maths and almost feel euphoria from the sense

that there may be a higher knowledge still to be unearthed which, of we are as

yet unaware.

Changing school and adjusting to the new style of learning was an issue that

contributed to my underachievement at AS level, but I have gained further

understanding of my subjects and am currently demonstrating how much of an

improvement I will make in my upcoming exams and retakes through better exam

technique.

Being selected as a maths prefect has given me the opportunity to help

younger students and promote my passion for the subject to many younger students

through open evenings, displays and assisting in lessons. As much as I believe

in motivation coming from within, this can also lead us to think that we do

maths entirely for its own sake. However that is apocryphal: the communal aspect

of maths which enables us to be stimulated by the people around us and help

other people solve their mathematical problems is crucially important.

Music is a mind-body exercise; you learn to become one with your body and

mind while discovering how to be in harmony with the people around you. I am

heavily involved in my church, my previous and current school’s choirs, where I

have been lucky enough to perform at various prestigious events. While having

fun, to my amazement I was actually developing my numbers, logic, discipline,

agility, and maths through reading music. I have participated in drama

performances for ‘The School’s Shakespeare Festival’ where I have travelled to

many theatres to perform plays such as ‘The Twelfth Night’, and ‘Much Ado about

Nothing’ and have become familiar with good memory skills through learning

Shakespearian lines. My communication skills have also improved significantly

through this involvement with drama.

Teamwork has been a fundamental attribute that I have learnt during my school

career. I participated in a school enterprise week where groups competed to

create their own products, and as team leader and financial manager, I helped my

team beat our competitors by fostering a group atmosphere and will to win, which

we did. I was given the opportunity show my inner creative business side, work

with others and apply maths skills to real life.

Unlike other subjects which thrive on unsettled debates, give no final

answers and allow you to work in isolation, Maths places high priority on

comprehension, listening to others’ ideas and perceptions, which allows the

subject to operate more efficiently in the intellectual world hence why I am set

to study a degree in Maths.

点评：

1. 整篇文书虽然没有高级英文单词和复杂的数学术语，但时态准确，语法熟练，被动句、从句运用灵活，重复单词较少，阅读流畅。

2. 首段交代对数学产生兴趣的缘由——在You Tube上看了个有关数学的视频，从此打开了新世界大门~~

3. 中间还有一段说明自己A-level成绩不够的原因——经常换学校。小伙伴如果标化成绩不够，也可以尝试在PS中做说明。

4. 申请者谈了在夜校给青年们上数学课的独特经历，申请者甚至认识到数学可以感染他人，这觉悟绝对受招生官待见呐。

5. 数学很多时候是枯燥的，需要艺术调和，申请者爱好音乐和戏剧，参加教堂的合唱、在学校的莎士比亚戏剧节上扮演角色，这些统统都是加分项。

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