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范例1

申请者讲述了一段对自己产生重要影响的经历——打开心扉，遇见爱情，灰常浪漫且有个性了。

My most important experience sought me out. It happened to me; I didn't cause

it.

My preferred companions are books or music or pen and paper. I have only a

small circle of close friends, few of whom get along together. They could easily

be counted "misfits." To be plain, I found it quite easy to doubt my ability to

have any sort of "close relationship."

After the closing festivities of Andover Summer School this past summer, on

the night before we were scheduled to leave, a girl I had met during the

program's course approached me. She came to my room and sat down on my bed and

announced that she was debating with herself whether she wanted me to become her

boyfriend. She wanted my reaction, my opinion.

I was startled, to say the least, and frightened. I instantly said, "No." I

told her I on no account wanted this and that I would reject any gestures she

made towards starting a relationship. I would ignore her entirely, if need be. I

explained that I was a coward. I wanted nothing whatsoever to do with a

relationship. I talked a lot and very fast.

To my surprise, she did not leave instantly. Instead, she hugged her knees

and rocked back and forth on my bed. I watched her from across the room. She

rocked, and I watched. Doubts crept up on me. Opportunity had knocked and the

door was still locked. It might soon depart.

"I lied," I said. "I was afraid of what might happen if we became involved.

But it's better to take the chance than to be afraid."

She told me she knew I had lied. I had made her realize, though, how much she

actually wanted me to be her boyfriend. We decided to keep up a relationship

after Andover.

Even then, I was not sure which had been the lie. Now I think that everything

I said may have been true when I said it. But I'm still not sure.

I learned, that night, that I could be close to someone. I also realize, now,

that it doesn't matter whether or not that person is a misfit; the only

important thing is the feeling, the closeness, the connection. As long as there

is something between two people — friendship, love, shared interests, whatever

else — it is a sign that there can be some reconciliation with fear, some "fit"

for misfits. And it shows that fear need not always win, that we can grow and

change, and even have second chances.

I am still seeing her.

范例2

申请者谈了家人对自己选择密歇根大学的影响，并讲述了自己在专业方面的学习实践积累，全文围绕的主题非常突出——我与密歇根大学。

From the time I was able to realize what a university was, all I heard from

my mother's side of the family was about the University of Michigan and the

great heritage it has. Many a Saturday afternoon my grandfather would devote to

me, by sitting me down in front of the television and reminiscing about the

University of Michigan while halftime occurred during a Michigan Wolverines

football game. Later, as I grew older and universities took on greater meaning,

my mother and uncle, both alumni of the University of Michigan, took me to see

their old stamping grounds. From first sight, the university looked frightening

because of its size, but with such a large school comes diversity of people and

of academic and non-academic events.

In Springfield High School, non-academic clubs such as the Future Physicians

and the Pylon, both of which I have belonged to for two years, give me an

opportunity to see both the business world and the medical world. These two

clubs have given me a greater sense of what these careers may be like. In Future

Physicians, I participated in field trips to children's hospitals and also

participated in two blood banks.

Currently I hold a job at Maas Brothers. This lets me interact with people

outside my own immediate environment. I meet different kinds of people, in

diffrent moods, with different attitudes, and with different values. This job

teaches me to be patient with people, to have responsibility, and to appreciate

people for what they are.

In the community I am active in my church Youth Group. As a high school

sophomore, I was our church's representative to the Diocesan Youth Fellowship. I

helped organize youth group events, the largest being "The Bishop's Ball," a

state-wide event for 300 young people. I also played high school junior varsity

soccer for two years. As a senior I will be playing varsity soccer, but in the

off-season. As a junior I coached a girls' soccer team for the town. This gave

me a great deal of responsibility because the care of twenty-four girls was put

into my custody. It felt very satisfying to pass on the knowledge of soccer to

another generation. The girls played teams from other parts of Florida. Though

their record was 3-8, the girls enjoyed their season. This is what I taught them

was the greatest joy of soccer.

The past three years of my life have given me greater visions of my future. I

see the University of Michigan as holding a large book with many unread chapters

and myself as an eager child who has just learned to read. I intend to read and

probe into all the chapters. The University of Michigan offers me more than the

great reputation of this fine school, but a large student body with diverse

likes and dislikes, and many activities, both academic and non-academic, to

participate in. With the help of the University of Michigan, I will be

successful after college and be able to make a name and place for myself in our

society.

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