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【考场题目回忆】：

Which one of the following values is the most important to share with a

young child(5-10 years old)?

Being helpful

Being honest

Being well organized

【*旧题重现：2023.7-8月/2023.2.21/2.26家考原题】

Children are not, by nature, organized creatures, and an unorganized life

is a hindrance to their life long development, as opposed to an orderly one.

Hence, it is of vital importance to impart organizational skills to children who

are 5 to 10 years old. As for the rest two virtues mentioned in the statement,

sharing them with children of such age, compared with teaching them to be well

organized, is less significant.

Hindrance n. 造成妨碍的事物/人

As opposed to 恰相反

It is beyond doubt that integrity is one of the crucial assets. However, is

it necessary to consciously teach or learn such a virtue? As a matter of fact,

different from organizational skills, honesty comes naturally. In other words,

at an early age, as young as 7 or 9 years old, we are unlikely to lie, most

likely because we don’t know how to lie. Indeed, children of such age may

sometimes tell a fib like feigning illness to avoid exams. Parents or caregivers

should however be aware that such innocent little lies may be attributed to the

absence of organizational skills. After all, if those children are businesslike

enough to make and carry on the review plans regularly, how could they be afraid

of exams? And if they are well-organized and well-prepared, why should they

malinger?

Feign v. 假装，佯装

Absence n. 缺失

Businesslike adj. 井然有序的;效率高的

Typically, clutter and disorder in children’s surroundings contribute to

feelings of irritation and depression. Influenced by such negative feeling,

children may be prone to be demotivated, in which case they can too tardy to

handle their own staffs, let alone reaching out to others in need. Hence, before

trying to instill in children the virtues of helping others, we should primarily

guide children to attend to their own affairs - to push children to lead

organized lives as early as possible. It is also worth mentioning that the age

of 5 to 10 is the opportune time to do it, as a good habit is better to be

formed earlier than later, and children younger than 5 years old are too young

to take care of themselves.

Clutter n.杂乱

Reach out to 伸出援助之手

Instill in sb. Sth. 灌输xxx

attend to 处理;照顾

Opportune adj. 恰当的，适宜的

The habits of being organized is something that stays with children forever

and has far-reaching benefits for them.

后面利用排比写清楚具体什么技能带来什么好处就好啦。

参考如下词汇：

priorities — time management;

manage schoolwork commitments— a sense of independence;

Utilize time — maximize learning opportunities;

translate into other areas

In conclusion, teaching children between 5 to 10 years old a few

organizational skills early in life can benefit them immensely in the long run,

and this makes the organizational skills outshine the other two virtues.