托福独立写作开头如何写好-

2024-04-25

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托福独立写作开头如何写好?

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托福独立写作开头如何写好?如果考生在托福写作考试中可以有一个好的开头,那么你可能就成功一半了,今天易伯华小编就为大家讲讲托福独立写作的如何写好开头。

在写独立写作的开头段要遵循3要素:论点、 论证、自己的观点

论点的写作方法就是需要让大家知道这个话题为什么会出现在这里是什么让这个话题具有的讨论价值。

例1:Students in the future can have the choice to learn at home using

high-tech innovations, like TV or internet .Do you think they will still attend

traditional schools?

例2:TV advertising directed towards children (aged from 2 to 5) should not

be allowed.

例1中关于将来学生是不是在传统的教室里上课,这一题和科技发展有关系。因此这一题的introduction部分可以这样思考:社会发展、新科技不断出现这给人们生活的方方面面都带来了一些影响,其中的影响就是改变了学生们的上课方式.......

例2中这一题是在说针对于2致5岁的孩子的电脑广告应该被禁止,从背景上考虑这一题是可以从科技发展的方向入手:社会的发展离不开大众媒体的传播其中广告作为一种最常见的传播形式给人们的生活带来很大的影响,那么针对于2-5岁孩子的广告是不是允许传播....

那么关于论点,一共有2种常用形式:背景引入式;主题重申式

背景引入式的开头结构:

结合题目引入背景自然过渡到话题上,最后明确表达立场

例题:Students in the future can have the choice to learn at home using

high-tech innovations, like TV or internet. Do you thi nk they will still attend

traditional schools?

开头• We live in a technology world in which technology gives us many

opportunities to improve every aspect of our lives. • One of the most obvious

impacts which the technology has on education is that it has changed traditional

studying-in-class learning pattern.(引入背景) • Now we get the chance to study at

home by using technology such as computer or television.(过渡到话题) • This new

learning pattern, which I strongly recommend to everyone(明确立场), will save a lot

of time spent on the traveling between schools and living spots, moreover

learners can arrange their time schedule flexibly.(transition 过渡)

主题重申式又称为题目改写,此种方式的开头结构:

改写题目然后明确表达立场

例题:Some students like classes where teachers lecture (do all of the

talking) in class. Other students prefer classes where the students do some of

the talking. Which type of class do you prefer? Give specific reasons and

托福独立写作开头如何写好-

details to support your choice.

开头• There are basically two types of classes in universities, classes where

teachers lecture and that where the students do some of the talking. Some

students prefer the class in which they can talk because they believe the

exchange between teachers and students promotes learning; others will prefer

lectures which will deliver far more information to students(改写题目). • I prefer

the former approach although both teaching and learning approaches are valuable

and have relative merits.(明确立场) My reasons are listed below.(transition,过渡)

上述开头方式虽然明确的表达了观点但是整段读起来会比教啰嗦,因此下面介绍一种题目重申版,结构同样是改写题目、明确表达立场但是题目改写会简洁奥。

例题:Because the world is changing so quickly , peo ple now are less happy or

less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.

开头段:As the society developing rapidly, we can hear such voices sometimes in

our life that the modern society makes people morbid and peo ple should retrieve

their past life.(改写题目) However as far as I am concerned, the overall modern life

has virtually made people more del ighted than before.(明确立场)

最后希望大家可以认真学习上述所描述的内容,争取让自己在托福写作考试中取得满意的成绩。推荐阅读:托福听力考试知识点托福口语 TASK4:假装自己很难!!托福阅读考试时间不够?如何解决?独立写作真题范文 | 三两招突破独立写作系列(六)

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