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今日一招：

“别想了，举例吧”。

解读：抽象话题，没有具体的情景。于是，通过举例设置具体的情景来完成讨论。

“Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Remaining happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than

achieving success.”

以【立场： remaining happy and optimistic when you fail is more

important】为例，展示这一招：

The essence of doing anything may not be attaining the desired goal but

enjoying the process.

接下来怎么办?抽象话题，没有具体的情景。于是，通过举例设置具体的fail或achieve success的情景或者经历来完成讨论。

I have personally met many failures and successes in my study. To reflect

on the many past achievements and disappointments, I find that those results did

not really matter. What really mattered is how I managed to achieve a goal or

what mindset I adopted in the face of being unable to achieve the desired

result. As long as the learning, as the process, was productive andenlightening,

I did not care about the grades, and it was being able to remain happy and

optimistic when I failed that made the process meaningful.

注意：举例中，不特别具体的某个事件(比如，不是具体的某个presentation、experiment或者paper)，而可以是一种宽泛的情况。

别急，还有福利。

如果我们【立场：remaining happy and optimistic when you fail is more

important】，轻松复制这一招：

Success creates a pleasure that is far more joyful and overwhelming than

the happiness or optimism we have when we fail.

上一个演示段落里设置的具体的fail或achieve success的情景或者经历，简单调整就可以用来讨论另一个立场了，轻松、省脑。

I have personally met many failures and successes in the many examinations

I have taken. To revisit the many past accomplishments and disappointments, I

find that those good grades were way more enjoyable than theresilient mindset in

the face of poor grades. This is best illustrated by a particular case that I

failed multiple times in my attempt to pass the qualification test of being a

nutritionist and eventually achieved a passing score and got the license in my

third attempt. The joy was a feeling that is so strong that no optimism in any

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