托福综合写作过程中,想要完成最好的文章,关键的一步还是速记。在很多的托福高分经验中,我们也都可以看到,很多学生都会建议在综合写作过程中大家尽量要多记录一些听到的内容,在写作中将听到的内容返回到写作中才能获取高分。
而我们从托福综合写作的固定要求中,也是可以基本可以看到写作模板应该去如何搭建,比如,讲座要么是质疑或者反驳阅读文章,要么是支持或者加强阅读文章,所以只需要把相关描述质疑或者支持的固定语句直接搭建在综合写作的模板中就可以了。当然,我们也建议大家能够为自己多准备几套综合写作模板,让托福综合写作能有更好的发挥。
而在托福综合写作模板构建的过程中,我们也建议大家可以去找一些优秀的综合写作范文,再用笔划掉其中涉及题目具体内容的部分。最后把余下来的部分抄写下来,再稍加变通和修改,就可以得到一个实用性比较强的模板。
参考例子:
The writer and the speaker have a debate on sending astronauts. The writer puts forward three obstacles, which are opposed by the following lecture.
First, the writer claims that the landing is not safe. From 1996 to 1999, four spacecrafts crashed because of computer errors. While the speaker views this issue from an opposite angle, according to him/her, computer program accuracy has been improved. Besides, astronauts could adjust conditions to avoid unexpected events. No spacecratfs have crashed since 1999.
Secondly, the passage states that It is hard for spacecraft to carry fuels. Spacecraft needs to carry large amounts of fuels for its way to Mars as well as back then. However, the speaker casts doubt on this opinion by saying that when the there is no need to take a lot of fuels. Hydrogen and Oxygen in ice on Mars can make fuels. Therefore, spacecraft only need to take fuel that supports it to Mars.
Last, the writer argues that the trade between the without protection, astronauts would suffer radiation. By contrast, in accordance with the speaker, this claim does not hold water. Magnetic field can be created to guarantee safety. It is as same as the earth magnetic field. |