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Task：To improve the quality of education, people think that we should

encourage our students to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Others believe

that it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Sample answer：

Nowadays, whether evaluating and criticising teachers should be supported in

the classroom has become a controversial issue. From my perspective, evaluation

and criticism of teachers are necessary for the improvement of education if they

are objective and reasonable.

On the one hand, proposing changes to teachers’ lesson content contributes to

the improvement of teaching quality. Usually, it is difficult for teachers to

realise the mistakes and slips in their teaching unless students remind them.

Additionally, teachers may not clearly know what students have known and want to

know when planning their lessons. If students can put forward their ideas and

suggestions towards the lesson, it will be of great help for teachers to upgrade

the teaching projects. Moreover, trying to evaluate teachers’ lesson is

particularly beneficial for students’ academic and career development in the

future. The modern education emphasises criticism and innovation. Undoubtedly,

it is an effective way for students to debate or discuss with teachers.

On the other hand, the disruptive students will probably disturb the class

and negatively affect both teaching and learning outcomes. When students voice

their opinions in the classroom, it will be hard to maintain the order and

discipline and the teachers may feel disrespected. Also, students will suffer a

loss in terms of knowledge and other learning content. This is because teachers

always devote much to delivering knowledge and explaining theories. If they are

disrupted, the teaching plan may not be able to be fulfilled. As a result, both

teachers and students have to face a loss in the quality of education.

To sum up, it can be recommended that students evaluate and criticise

teachers in the classroom on the premise that they have decent manners without

disturbing the learning atmosphere. Only in this way will teachers and students

achieve a win-win outcome in education.

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